403i-24 disconecting, Aug, 20, 2024, {Oct, 25, 2024, Thu}, [Oct, 25, 2024, fri]
shortly after
8:00 p.m.
I look around in the crowded bus
all seats occupied
several travel
standing up
of those
I am able
to observe
all but one
uses a smartphone
he eats
potato
chips
when he finishes the pack
picks up the phone
too
I stand up
as my destination point
approaches
swiftly
after
balance myself
new look around
shows another one
without a cellphone in hand
like myself
she stands up
tries to balance herself
she ...
it is time to get off
time to pause
the typing
and ...
@vanres2023
20/07/2024
{25, out, 2024}
Antologia: Miríade e Distopia (2004-2024) - edição, by @vanres1974
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disconnections
shortly after
8:00 p.m.
I look around in the crowded bus
all seats occupied
several travel
standing up
of those
I am able
to observe
all but one
uses a ...
continua:
https://vanres1974.blogspot.com/2024/10/403i-24%20.html
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403i-24 disconecting, Aug, 20, 2024, {Oct, 25, 2024, Thu}, [Oct, 25, 2024, fri]
shortly after
8:00 p.m.
I look around the crowded bus
all seats occupied
several traveling standing
of those
I am able to observe
only one does not use a smartphone
eats potato chips when finishing the package picks up the phone too I stand up my destination point approaches as I try to balance myself the look to the other passengers shows only another one without a cell phone in her hand like me she stands up and try to balance herself to get off the bus time to pause typing
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@vanres2023
20/07/2024
[24, out, 2024
Antologia: Miríade e Distopia (2004-2024) - edição, by @vanres1974
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403-24 desconexões, 20, ago, 2024, {24, oct, 2024, qui}, [24, oct, 2024, qui]
